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KuraiTsuki

High above the field of flowers
Is a force with ordain illuminating powers
So distant from my heart as the luminous towers
Over the night sky in the late hours

I wish to go closer to her radiant grace
Yet I cannot seem to find the courage
As I feel my heart race and with it disgrace
My body continues to tremble as if to rapidly age

As time passes I start to feel
My worse fears starting to peel
And I find the strength to rise up towards the divine light
Never wishing to look away no matter how bright

Being in earshot of this natural beauty
I am surprised to find a charming lady
who can only be described as the perfect lady of liberty
She is a princess of the moon; the KuraiTsuki.

What I would not do for such beauty apparent
Her looks in themselves were far beyond pleasant
She was the reason why the moon would shine so bright
Why my heart races at the passing of night

The KuraiTsuki, a dark moon goddess true
You came into my life from out of the blue
And affect me like no other woman could do
And for that I am always indebt to you
©2008-2009 ~PaladinGideon
:iconpaladingideon:

Author's Comments

Hello everyone! ^^ Sorry I haven't been around posting in a long time but things have been crazy around here...perhaps to crazy even... :( In anycase, this lovely poem *which is probably my best work yet*, is written for someone who truly deserves this...and her name is Messa :iconmessa: A talented artist...with both intelligence and a personality to boot. A vivid and creative individual who even made things like a McDonalds cup look colorful and defended inflation art by drawing someone who even in her inflated form looked so beautiful. This, I happily dedicate to you, messa. Your ability must be recognized and for that I thank you with this. :hug:

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:iconstevothepimpdaddy:
Wow! @_@ Looks like the break helped! I think Messa will LOVE this man! ^^

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What would you do if it all ended tommorrow?
Time running out, ain't no more you can borrow.
So many paths which one are you going to follow?
What would you do if it all ended tommorrow?

~John Cena~
:iconpaladingideon:
Thanks for the fav! And I really hope so! ^^;

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- Craig and Anh forever -

A man chooses...a slave obeys...
:iconmartmeisterpaladin:
I am sure she will. :D

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One of these days, I will know what the kumquats are hiding from me... and I will claim their secret as my own....
:iconpaladingideon:
:hug: Thank you for your support ^^

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- Craig and Anh forever -

A man chooses...a slave obeys...
:iconmessa:
Of course I love this! I think its just so cute and rhyme-y and really, thank you so much. :hug: I'm glad I could help you out.. I still stick by the thought that I'm really not that great, but regardless of my lack of self esteem, thank you very much for those kind words.

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elysiumn.net :butterflytwo: em@il
:iconpookaangharad:
Oh wow, this is lovely, you're right I think you're poems are getting so much better every time you make a new one. XD :hug:

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:kitty:

The one person, no matter what we go through, all our ridiculous fights, the many years, the sheer distance apart, who always manages to be more friend or family than any others: ~lithium-moon
And I love her for it.
:iconpaladingideon:
Thanks very much sis! :hug: Oh and if your online tommorrow, I'll be on from 10:00 to 1:00 ^^

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- Craig and Anh forever -

A man chooses...a slave obeys...
:iconpaladingideon:
:hug: You are very welcome! ^^ And you should not have low self esteem. :( Your a great person to be around with...I'd gladly help you out whenever you need it. ^^ Oh and thank you for the fav! :glomp:

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- Craig and Anh forever -

A man chooses...a slave obeys...
:iconxplague:
Aw, how sweet ^^ Nice couplets~ Is that what rhyming pairs are called? I forget =P

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~One day, I'll get my revenge on those damn mango-snatching monkeys!~

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